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Title: Miscalculation
Theme: July Writing Prompt 2014 #01 - July 01
Prompt: fall down
Author: Alaylith
Rating: PG
Universe: BBC (S1)
Characters: Sherlock
Word Count: 139
Summary: Never before did Sherlock have to consider another person, so he is quite surprised when he miscalculates.

A/N: Hey, I am still alive. Watson's Woes July Writing Prompts started and this year I want to participate again. Haven't been writing anything since... NaNoWriMo2013 I think - so more than 6 months ago...

This is not much, just a little drabble for the prompt. Don't have any idea for a bigger story to connect these prompts to (yet), so for now we will see what will happen over the next few days. :)


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Sherlock always calculates everything in his life and he knows everything related to his work.

He knows his city, he knows the criminals and he knows his own body.
Every step he takes within his city is secure and precise, there is nothing that can go wrong.

That is the reason why he can cross streets whenever he wants or jump from building to building.
That is the reason why almost no criminal can escape him when he is on the hunt.

He never fails.

Until today.

Sherlock never had to consider another person, never had to calculate another person's abilites.
It never occured to him that another person may not be able to follow his steps, because he calculated them so perfectly.

Perfectly for himself.

So Sherlock is taken by surprise when - following his lead - John slips.

Date: 01/07/2014 20:43 (UTC)
ext_3554: dream wolf (Default)
From: [identity profile] keerawa.livejournal.com
I like this! It's exactly the sort of error Sherlock WOULD make, accustomed as he is to being alone.

Date: 02/07/2014 00:29 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pompey01.livejournal.com
Yes, this is DEFINITELY an in-character happening for both of them!

Date: 02/07/2014 03:41 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
Oooh, spot on for Sherlock, exactly what could happen.

Date: 02/07/2014 04:26 (UTC)

Tuesday, July 1, 2014

Date: 02/07/2014 07:00 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] livejournal.livejournal.com
User [livejournal.com profile] carolyn_claire referenced to your post from Tuesday, July 1, 2014 (http://holmesian-news.livejournal.com/377600.html) saying: [...] by (Watson | PG | ACD) Miscalculation [...]

Date: 02/07/2014 14:57 (UTC)
methylviolet10b: a variety of different pocketwatches (Default)
From: [personal profile] methylviolet10b
I can totally see this happening. Well done!

Date: 02/07/2014 16:46 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
I agree with the other comments: Totally believable and in character!

Date: 02/07/2014 23:28 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chiralove.livejournal.com
Eeep - hope John is all right! :/

Date: 03/07/2014 05:11 (UTC)
hagstrom: (Default)
From: [personal profile] hagstrom
Whaaaaaaat!!! This is exciting and I'm dying to read more on it!

Date: 07/07/2014 01:52 (UTC)
ancalime8301: (books-artsy)
From: [personal profile] ancalime8301
Aww... and yes, I can definitely see that happening!
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